Great like we used too
you took your time and you should have! it turned out great and i loved seeing the story from another persons perspective, with that i mean Jebus. he's awesome but i hope hank will return and the shadowy guy will want revenge.
the ending you've created here was well thought i think. i wonder what the next part will be about cuz uve kind of hidden it with this ending. keep up your perfect work i was cheering for you even before i registered on NG and i will still cheer for you, you're my favorite.
also ignore the sunsofbitches who said it sucked cuz they are immature bastards who have easy talking cuz they can't deliver the same work you do.